This is my IB TOK essay. An IB TOK essay requires of very specific standards, so please be aware of them.
You may want to read the second draft (page 2-5) and teacher's feedback first.
If you're a IB diploma holder, then please let me know through the chatroom.
Attached are:
TOK2_1: rough draft (not to be edited)
TOK2_2: second draft (to be edited)
- Please read the instruction in page 1 & 9 carefully first, refer to page 2 to 5, and rewrite the final draft according to the teacher's feedback.
TOK Feedback: the feedback for the second draft from my TOK teacher.
I am certainly willing to add funds if I get a good grade, but if the final draft I receive doesn't follow the IB TOK standard or teacher's feedback, then I may not release the fund.