Please follow the Guidelines I give below to write. It's very important. And this is the feedback I receive last time: The second response paper fails to reflect adequately the gist of the assigned materials for Module two: the introduction part is very vague and confusing, containing a lot of irrelevant information; the same applies to the majority of the summarizing paragraphs; the analysis part rather reinstates some central topics than critically interpret them. Taking into account it is the second inefficient response paper in a row, I strongly urge you to contact TA Stanislav Skritki (firstname.lastname@example.org) to discuss with him the ways to improve subsequent works. And Note that all readings are about this one module. Not for different module.