Great Issues I/World of Ideas I
Paper 1
Address all parts
of this prompt:
(1) What standard does Aquinas establish to distinguish
between just and unjust laws? In what
ways does King operate within this standard? In what ways does he revise or expand
it?
(2) What arguments does Kreon offer to justify his decree in
Antigone? Are his justifications
consistent with the scope of legal authority expressed by Aquinas? Describe similarities and differences.
(3) What arguments does King present to justify
breaking an unjust law? In what manner does he believe an unjust law must
be broken? Why does he believe breaking
the law in this way and accepting punishment will remedy injustice?
(4) Contrast King’s arguments for breaking an
unjust law and accepting the punishment with at least one of the
following: Antigone, by Socrates, or by Thomas More (“A Man for All
Seasons.”)
How are their arguments similar? How do they differ, in the
deliberation before breaking the law and in accepting the punishment? How
are their moral and political motivations similar? How do they
differ?
Guidelines: Paper 1 is due at noon on Wednesday, June 15.
Your answer will be a maximum
of six typed, double-spaced
pages. Use 12 pt. Times New Roman font
with 1-inch margins. Do not use a title page. Put your name on the top of page 1, include a
title, and start your essay.
Your answer should
(1) Clearly state your overall
thesis and answers to the three questions in your introduction. You must take a position on the questions you
address.
(2) Show me, don’t tell me. Refer to specific arguments in the text. Include a citation with the name of the
author or work you mention with a line, page or paragraph number: (Antigone
1005-1010, Crito 49a, Aquinas Q. 95, A. 2, p. 78, King p. 84)
Your essay should include many
citations. If you use only class sources, there is no need for a works cited. You do not need outside sources to write an
A-level paper.
(3) Have excellent style,
organization, grammar and spelling.
(4) The body and conclusion of your
paper should identify relevant points—based on cited textual evidence--where
authors agree or disagree.
Submission: Your paper is due at noon on Wednesday, June 15. Send your paper through Brightspace and to coluccif@pnw.edu as text pasted in the
message AND as a Word attachment. Once I
open your paper, I will send an email confirming receipt.
If you have any questions about
this assignment, email me at coluccif@pnw.edu.
Essay Check-List
Introductory
Paragraph
Does your introductory paragraph introduce a clear, concise
thesis statement? Is the thesis statement too vague or awkward? Does the
introduction preview all topics addressed in the body?
Re-read your thesis statement. Does it address the essay
questions?
Do you use the personal “I”? Does it have phrases such as
“this paper will show that …”? Eliminate them.
Body Paragraphs
Does your paragraph begin with a strong topic sentence? Is
the topic sentence clear, concise, and meaningful?
Does your topic sentence introduce a point? Or does it
merely state a fact?
Do you explain how your topic sentence relates back to your
thesis statement?
Is every sentence in your paragraph related to the
paragraph’s topic sentence?
Does the paragraph merely list facts and quotes? Or do you
use facts and quotes to further your own interpretation?
Does the paragraph contain a concluding sentence that makes
a point or transitions into the next paragraph? Does the paragraph logically
follow from the paragraph that precedes it? Does the paragraph move smoothly
into the paragraph that follows it?
The Essay
Quotations: Have
you incorporated your quotes into one of your sentences? Do you use any
stand-alone quotes? Have you placed quotation marks around all the material you
have quoted? Have you used any “loose
quotes” (re-written sentences from readings)?
Does each direct quote or paraphrase include a reference
with author and page (or paragraph) number?
Style: Identify
sentences that use the “to be” verb. Next, revise the sentence by eliminating
the “to be” verb and replacing it with an action verb.
Do you have excessively long sentences or run-ons? Re-write
them as two or more separate sentences.
Do you have any excessively long paragraphs (2/3 page or
more)? Divide them into two or more separate paragraphs as the topic changes or
shifts.
Does the paper have a formal or informal writing style?
Proof-Reading:
Have you given your paper a thorough proofreading for grammar and sound-alike
and missing words? Have you read the paper aloud, or have you had someone else
proofread it?
Plagiarism: Have
you used any outside sources? If so, cite them in text and on a works cited section
at the end of the paper. Otherwise, you are committing plagiarism.