Big note for intro: You need a hook—introduce the ideas before jumping into the
Big note for intro: You need a hook—introduce the ideas before jumping into the film. Your thesis needs to clearly state why the issue you’ve selected from the film is still very relevant today, and specifically on college campuses. After that, every paragraph should serve one purpose: support this thesis. You’ll do this by bringing up relevant scenes (with direct quotes) from the film, and then moving to current research, and then adding any personal experience you have as a college student. *You do have a lot of summary from the film; consider adding just a few direct quotes (with in text citations) and then you need to come in as the writer to put things in context and connect with things happening on college campuses today. PLEASE USE THE FEEDBACK GIVEN AND MAKE PROPER REVISIONS

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